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Saints and Sinners

Tales of saints and sinners of ancient times Where human nature becomes the paradigm And the green eyed monster reared its ugly head In the dust one brother lay dead A tale of strength, but man was weak And from his lips his secret slipped As his lover's betrayal wreaked his demise, and all his strength was stripped Julius Caesar the perpetual king No saint was he but fate did bring him to a gruesome end Lured to his death by a so called friend Friendships often turn to dust When betrayal is the sin from those we trust

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Date: 12/23/2016 1:15:00 PM
SUPERB SONNET-EERING.. Exceptional verses ringing out a clear and true message! A7 AND ADDING TO MY FAV LIST.. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOURS!
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:23:00 PM
wow, you chose a great way to approach this theme, doing examples of betrayal from the ancient times. Very nice, No congrats on this one? (maybe it's not judged yet!)
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:47:00 PM
An excellent take on "saints and sinners" I like how this poem flows so well!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 10/28/2016 11:13:00 AM
I like it how you use friendship to point out this truth. Good luck!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/28/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Darren
Date: 10/27/2016 3:30:00 PM
I am assuming you are speaking of Cain, then Samson and Delilah, and of course Julius Caesar. We can all learn from these sad relationships no matter how many centuries ago they happened. I enjoyed this poem Joseph.; ) 7
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Joseph May
Date: 10/28/2016 7:49:00 AM
Yes Connie, and they teach us lessons about human nature...Thank you..
Date: 10/27/2016 6:22:00 AM
Excellent. Thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/27/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Ravi
Date: 10/26/2016 10:32:00 PM
thought-provoking poem, joseph... a worthwhile read on betrayal.. huggs
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Joseph May
Date: 10/27/2016 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Nette

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