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Sailors Beware

Brightly shining light Forewarning of some danger Guiding sailors home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 1:16:00 AM
And many a sailor has thanks for the brightly shining lights perched on hill tops or precarious rocky crops. Many congratulations Ralph on your win in Annalise's contest. Have a great weekend....:)
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:46:00 PM
I like the ambiguity here. Sometimes that can be frustrating, but not here. It gives this mystical heft and lifts it from the merely competent to the next level. Thanks, Ralph! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:17:00 PM
Ralph, congratulations on winning in the contest sponsored by Annalise with this entry.
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations Ralph, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:51:00 AM
Hello Ralph, Congratulations on your well deserved win in he contest. As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:25:00 PM
Great job Ralph, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems ninth place honored win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations you somewhat took the same frame of thought as mine,,Thank You for reading and commenting,,all the best in future contests,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:50:00 PM
Big congrats to you, my friend. As a sailor, the light in the distance could either be a lighthouse or lightning. Excellent comparison of the two images. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congrats Ralph on your well deserved win with this wonderful Haiku!---kashinath
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this very fitting description of the photo, Ralph :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congrats Ralph on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy top ten victory with luv.. luv..
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:20:00 AM
many warm congrats for this success.
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:34:00 PM
Hello, Ralph. I see you on the winners' list. Congratulations and it was fun rereading your haiku!
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:09:00 PM
Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on you 8th Place Win in my contest, Ralph. And I thank you for your support. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:12:00 PM
Very nice one,Ralph. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:31:00 PM
Great one that reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2011 3:26:00 PM
Nicely written Haiku.A great entry into the contest---kashinath
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