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Sailing

Traverse autumn wind unfettered, wispy, gliding sail to destiny

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/3/2013 11:04:00 AM

love this, my friend. Hope you are having a great weekend. My vampire book and the co write poetry book were finally released, and the vampire novel was accepted. Hope things are easier for you with J. Hi to Andrea xx

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:48:00 PM

Really like your last line and I love how you wrote it as if the leaves are "sailing". Congratulations on your 12th place win.

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2010 12:59:00 PM

Many congratulations Audrey with this delightful Haiku >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Audrey in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:38:00 PM

lovely imagery, congrats on your win

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2010 2:18:00 PM

nice job Audrey...it's like yoiur words are riding the leaves in the wind...and the leaves riding your words. Wonderful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:00:00 AM

Audrey, this is so weird. I just went to congratulate you and my message disappeared!! I said I loved the way you used these neat words in your haiku. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 10:59:00 AM

Great words you used here, Audrey. How is your weekend? Well, it's still a weekend for ME anyway! Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:19:00 AM

Audrey, congrats on your win in Rick's contest with your beautiful Haiku, love Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:10:00 PM

A wonderful haiku, and I am so happy to see it win. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations on the 12th place win in the contest, Audrey

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:58:00 PM

Beautiful comparison of a falling leaf to the act of sailing. Congratulations on you win, dear Audrey! Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:45:00 PM

Congrats, Audrey. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congrats to my BBF on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and super win my friend for u to enjoy tonight... we are HOME...at last..luv..your BBF...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2010 9:52:00 PM

Awesome. I heard there were many great entries in this contest and I just read one of the first! LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2010 6:49:00 PM

You bet ye! Sail unfettered to our destiny. Cool Haiku. agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/30/2010 11:52:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku Audrey, all the best for the contest., love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 10:16:00 AM

There is a very sweet and gentle melody in your haiku about the falling leaves, Dimples. Well done! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2010 8:34:00 AM

lovely, good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 8:24:00 AM

A nice haiku on the falling leaf, Audrey