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Sailboat of Thoughts

() Ahoy!~~> () I am () Captain....Dan () I have been trying () for quite sometime now () to change this once beautiful () world.Change it from all of its new () dark and dreary days.To change how () people now think,and also show them that () there are so many other new and exciting ways. () To show this great boat floating out on the open sea. () That's waiting for you to climb aboard before it drifts free () () () () () All of the people working so hard for their money,then just throwing it all away? Buying new things they don't really need just to keep up with the hip new way. Why not tell yourselves you really don't need those things. Then live your lives your own separate ways? I'd hate for you to be standing all alone on the beach,when this boat starts to suddenly sail away Captain Dan, who always cares:2-12-13

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Date: 6/12/2015 1:26:00 AM
Dan, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:28:00 PM
Ship Ahoy, ship ahoy, ship ahoy, ship ahoooooy! Ship Ahoy! Sail into Mombasa Harbour. There's plenty of rum waiting... Captain 'Morgan' Dan.
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Date: 3/29/2013 9:57:00 AM
Dearest bro captain Dan..how awesome is your write..:) :) :) am gonna lend my ears to your thoughts and sail it nicely with the boat.. <3 :) a very very nice sharing ..enjoyed so much :) luv and lights <3
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Date: 2/12/2013 6:33:00 PM
That awesome poem is ship shape. Very enjoyable.
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Date: 2/12/2013 5:08:00 PM
Permission to come aboard Capt? Loved those lines!!!!! Hope you have red skies tonight!!!!!
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:18:00 AM
An excellent shape poem with a wonderful message! Well done, Dan! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/12/2013 2:38:00 AM
One man alone can not save the whole world. - Everyone must "travel in the same boat." - Love your sailing boat! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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