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Said the Shadow

Sorry friends After it got clobbered I decided to give it to the boss for review. She said their were too many grammatical mistakes and some boo boos. She fixed and give to my son to OK since I had no permission to put it on and the inevitable happened. He said its going in the book and I wont be allowed to make any more post. without permission. I had only gotten permission for the first two He said he will consider letting me become a life time member so I can sponsor contest. (I am also not allowed to respond to anyone comment) I an in the dog house. Sorry Said the shadow I am always crawling behind you. I am yours, no! I am his, hers, theirs. Did I scare you? No ---oo! I just pull the pee out of you. 11/2/2015 © A. JUman - The said Poet Type In (A. Juman) For A relaxing and astonishing moment with all my POEMS

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Rudolph Rinaldi

Date: 6/7/2021 2:22:00 PM

I READ A NUMBER OF YOUR POEMS AFTER YOU SENT ME A COMMENT SAYING YOU LIKED ONE OF MINE. I WANTED TO SEE WHAT KIND OF PERSON COULD LIKE ONE OF MY POEMS AND I LOVE YOUR POEMS. SCARY, ISN'T IT ? YOU TRY TO SPEAK TO YOURSELF AND YOU WIND UP SPEAKING TO SOME OTHERS IN YOUR PLACE.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/12/2015 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one.

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:44:00 PM

Sorry Sir, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:45:00 PM

Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more.

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:08:00 AM

Sorry Nayda - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2015 2:49:00 PM

Okay!!SK

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:46:00 PM

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:09:00 AM

Sorry Sara - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 10:53:00 AM

A. Zaladin, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:46:00 PM

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:09:00 AM

Sorry Skat - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/11/2015 8:52:00 AM

Just swinging back to congratulate you, my friend, on your win! Have a great day! Pandita

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:46:00 PM

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:10:00 AM

Sorry Pandita - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Tammy Reams

Date: 11/11/2015 8:43:00 AM

Congrats n your win A. Zaladin! Thank you for entering into my contest.

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:47:00 PM

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:11:00 AM

Sorry Tammy - My son rebuke me for putting on these works without permission and I am not allowed to leave remarks because they say my grammar is atrocious. Sorry

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/9/2015 3:18:00 PM

What an exquisite piece, my friend! The imagery is most amazing! Please continue to churn out more of these pieces with the ink from your golden pen! A-7 for sure! Pandita

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 3:36:00 PM

My dear Pandita, I love your name.I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart Thanks again from way across the pond

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/9/2015 2:34:00 PM

How bout Kudos! I have tried this edgy difficult form, but you pulled it off beautifully!, jill

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 2:49:00 PM

Jill --I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart thanks again

Kevin Leake

Date: 11/9/2015 1:17:00 PM

Extremely good write Zaladin, You have played with those colours really well, and taken it to a new level with wonderful imagery and passion. Best Wishes Kevin

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 1:30:00 PM

Thanks a million Kevin. I am so glad you love it as that is my goal. Do come back to visit.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/9/2015 7:37:00 AM

Impassioned write here, Zaladin! I love the ride as I read through your piece. I love the way how your words play to create such a beautiful poem.

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 8:51:00 AM

Love your name. Hija Thanks a million for stopping by and spending time to read. Thanks again and do drop by again. you are most kind.

Patrycjusz Kopec

Date: 11/8/2015 12:22:00 PM

Good imagery, good expression like the poem

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 12:41:00 PM

Thanks a million Patryc I really appreciate that

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/7/2015 6:31:00 PM

The capitalized words are very effective for this burning, passionate poem. "Strange sounds made me look down the shimmering black abyss, to see her now puffed prune lips burrowing through the snow."...those are some chilling lines... very interesting work here! Always, Laura

A. Juman
Date: 11/7/2015 7:00:00 PM

Laura thanks --I feel very shy thanking any one for this poem but sincere thanks. What ever I write I wrote with love from my heart

Abdelwaheb Dhaou

Date: 11/7/2015 5:15:00 AM

Awesome write,pregnant with vivid imagery. I really elated. Bravo !

A. Juman
Date: 11/7/2015 8:28:00 AM

Thanks a million --Abdelwahe I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder--I like bravo

Marilyn Williams

Date: 11/6/2015 10:33:00 AM

I like this much. It tells a lot.

A. Juman
Date: 11/6/2015 11:36:00 AM

Marilyn --thanks a million for giving me your opinion. It gives me encouragement

Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2015 10:29:00 PM

Hi, I am here to look at your poetry as requested, well the writing is beautiful, I love your descriptions, well done there, however, this is not a Concrete form, a concrete form takes the shape of the thing it is describing, you can look that up on our forms section, what you have here in my opinion is a very pretty free verse, hope this helps, it is important to write in the form you specify especially when entering contests and thanks for visiting my poetry ~

Constance La France
Date: 11/6/2015 4:16:00 PM

Well concrete is suppose to have a shape like a diamond or box or flower that kind of thing, not all the examples on poetry soup are correct so be careful with that, you can look concrete up on our forms section or google it, but I see you have changed your poem to Free Verse and that makes it a perfect and lovely write ...

A. Juman
Date: 11/6/2015 3:21:00 AM

Can you please tell me what form I can use--really appreciate thanks again

A. Juman
Date: 11/6/2015 3:16:00 AM

Thanks much I do appreciate and will change that but---- I don't really understand concrete because I read one describing cloud and light and they don't have shape ---thanks a lot again really appreciate.