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Safely Home

. Morning drive Dark, scary,arrive Relief, going home early sunrise Red on the horizon looking to eastern skies Now no clouds or impurities that could disguise As I bid grandson loving shaloam On the road again roam Safely Home (Trois Par Huit is not on the list.. Entered as Rhyme>>) (My grandson who lives with me has gone to work..I am having to transport him..It is dark when I leave home every morning..)

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 1:33:00 AM

excellent words here my friend thank you duncan

Johneesha Weaver

Date: 10/22/2010 7:35:00 AM

That is nice and thank you for your comment,Johneesha

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/20/2010 6:41:00 AM

Sara, what a beautiful write.. This made me smile :) love Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 10/19/2010 6:20:00 PM

That's letting the thought roll out Sara. We need to do more of this. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/19/2010 5:27:00 PM

wonderful, Sara the thought of alone is scary, glad a relief is lifted when you gp home, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Randall Smith

Date: 10/19/2010 2:50:00 PM

I like the red horizon....nicely done

John Rhinem

Date: 10/19/2010 2:44:00 PM

Smile ~ Or, a night without a day but, don't be afraid dear because, "You Have 'The Father of Light' Wherein, 'Everything,' Is 'Eternally Bright!!!'" ~ "Lovely Poe From 'A Precious Heart; Beautiful'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Beautiful & Priceless, Sara Kendrick;'" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 10/19/2010 2:38:00 PM

Smile ~ Fear of death "Always" amazes myself amid many whom hold its shadows so near as if, it were something more than just a door ~ But, upon the other hand well, for some, there is "An Eternity," they must surely soon, consider...."Thank You" for stopping by the other day "Beautiful Sara Kendrick" &, "Yes," that artificial sweetener is kind of like, a sea without a shore ~ ....Cont:)

Suresh Iyer

Date: 10/19/2010 11:49:00 AM

NICE way to say adieu loved it, suresh

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/19/2010 8:11:00 AM

A nice goodbye to your grandson, sara