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Safe In My Heart Forever

I am really missing you today Mommy, I am melancholy, So I took the bus for that long, long journey; It took me most of the day to get to the cemetery, All the headstones were buried in the white. But I knew the path to you. I trudged in the knee deep snow to that place of tears, The wind blowing wispy filigree snow in my face; And I fell to my knees in front of your tomb, your grave, I placed a blood red rose in the white snow. And I wept for what I have lost. Long I stayed there with my tears frozen on my cheek, And my raven hair lost in the north winds; Then I got up and I knew that my quest had no purpose, For you are not in this cold place of tombs. You are safe in my heart forever. " And I will treasure your arms last embrace, until this heart stops beating . . . . " __________________________ March 15, 2014 Poetry/Verse/Safe In My Heart Forever Copyright Protected, ID 03-549-494-15 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Written for the contest, Poems for Mommy, sponsor Leonora Galinta, Judged 03/2014 First Place

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Date: 1/23/2023 7:35:00 PM
Constance, I am on a journey from your blog through your poetry you listed. You sound like you look like my beautiful daughter, with long raven hair. She tells me if anything ever happens to me she will lose it. I know your mama adores you from heaven's shore and embraces you even now in your heart of memories through the beautiful love you shared.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2023 12:28:00 PM
BJ, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and compassion. This poem was so hard to write. It is a dagger in my heart that still bleeds. I will be going back to the cemetery soon and I will again walk through to deep snow to find mommy, love, Constance
Date: 5/30/2020 3:10:00 PM
Another deep and emotional write.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/30/2020 6:00:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 4/20/2020 7:22:00 AM
I feel the raw pain in this poem. Beautifully deep, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2020 4:51:00 PM
Line, thanks for the beautiful, yes, I wrote this with tears that day _Constance
Date: 3/28/2014 6:50:00 PM
very nicely done ;)
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:32:00 AM
This heartfelt write brought tears. Congrats on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Monterey.
Date: 3/20/2014 5:44:00 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, constance
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Ram.
Date: 3/19/2014 5:30:00 PM
Broken, A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 3/19/2014 1:51:00 PM
Such a heartfelt, lovely poem. That final verse rounds it all up. Congrats for a fine win. :) // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Paul
Date: 3/19/2014 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win Broken Wings!!! Soar up high... !!! ^__^
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Aiyah
Date: 3/19/2014 11:08:00 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my dear friend BW. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Leonora
Date: 3/17/2014 11:34:00 AM
this is beautiful, Constance. Thanks very much - loved the contest x
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Jack
Date: 3/16/2014 8:46:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive work..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 3/16/2014 1:15:00 AM
This poem immerses me in emotion my friend! You really have such awesome talent with these writes! I really enjoyed reading this dynamic piece here this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Russell.

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