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Im tired, Im done Dont treat me like Im one. Im sick, Im through Dont tell me what to do. You think you know but really you dont. What's it like to be all alone? Thats right you wouldn't know. I've shed the tears and felt the pain, because you made him go away. I loved him more than you comprehend, Why can't you just understand? I'll go away and wont come back, in that place I wont be sad. I'll be in his arms where I'm ok, I'll love him true, Forever & Always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/8/2012 2:47:00 PM
think it through Danielle,are you really ready,lol,nice write,be careful
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Danielle Cooper
Date: 8/21/2012 2:38:00 PM
lolz thanks. But I am ready. With the maturity of a 23 yr old and having grown up way to fast because of my mother, I am ready to pretty much take care of myself.
Date: 5/9/2012 10:59:00 AM
Touching, sad and well written. - Yes, I can feel that you love him. - Wish you all the best in life and LOVE! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/4/2012 10:50:00 AM
This poem is because of my mother and my true love. Thanks.
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