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Sadie Hawkins' Dance Date

Freshman year, newcomer to public school, my hormones were roused by Billy D. in typing class. Sadie Hawkins’ Dance just days away; a chance for girls to ask boys out. Too shy to show my interest, crumpled bits of paper I formed into balls, tossed them at the back of Billy’s head. Unsettled, as any boy would be, he glanced back at me. Wry smile, how could he know how my heart raced? Leo sat next to Billy, amused by this interaction. Because of his demeanor, it was Leo I asked to the dance. Turned out Leo couldn’t dance, though conversation was no problem. Leo spent the entire night talking about being an Eagle Scout -- tying knots, marking trails, building campfires -- seemed we had little in common. No chemistry at all, but Leo said, “Thank you,” at the dance’s end. For years I spent many days wondering what if I’d slipped Billy an invitation note, instead of lobbing paper balls? Perhaps he would have said, “Yes.” I might have had my first embrace; maybe even my first kiss. Years later at a school reunion Billy looked more handsome than ever; served as CEO of a Fortune 500 corporation. He introduced me to his pretty wife as the girl who pitched paper balls at his head. *True story for Carol Brown’s “First Date” contest. (Some folks were lucky to have more romantic first dates. LOL)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/16/2011 7:58:00 AM
hahaha, the last part is genius! I LOVE yours and would have put it with the first place ones. Congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/16/2011 5:06:00 AM
So nice to see you win & such a great tale! [You are VERY cautious time to let loose ;)]I couldn't remember my first date? Light & Love
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:11:00 PM
To search and miss, a stolen kiss, is better than the real thing, well done with thoughts and reminice, as into pictures springs. xo, Don
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:41:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Carolyn
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
You wrote a fantastic true read I enjoyed it very much.Atleast you didn't break down and walk 6 miles to a phone now thats romantic cause talked all the way.Congrats on this terrific win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 8:04:00 AM
Lovely witty piece, Carolyn. And presumably he never knew why you tossed paper balls at him, LOL
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Date: 7/7/2011 3:26:00 PM
Very lovely story of your first date Carolyn...liked it.Best wishes in Carol's contest.
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:17:00 PM
An interesting and amusing story. Most of us have at least one awkward teenage years tale to tell. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:07:00 PM
Wow, this is really good. Kinda sad, happy, and funny all at the same time. I really liked it, keep on writing! =)
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Date: 7/2/2011 4:37:00 PM
wonderful entry for the contest
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Date: 7/2/2011 3:48:00 PM
that is awesome go job. Your first date ended better then mine haha. cory
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