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Sad Valentine

my sweet love is a name deep engraved valentine once sweet love with roses candlelight dark red wine Satin sheets pearl necklace chocolates gifts of love now I bring red roses and lay them on his grave and I weep this lost love I ask God Why did you Take my love up above he had things yet to do forever he is my valentine _________________________ February 18, 2016 Poetry/Ellip/Sad Valentine Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-915-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Valentine Ellip, sponsor, ...Gigno Second Place

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Date: 3/22/2016 6:33:00 AM
A deep, moving verse.... Congrats BW, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
Teddy, thanks so much for visiting with the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 2/20/2016 12:54:00 AM
Its awesome! The emotions drip through every word and the pain of loss is expressed very vividly.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2016 12:57:00 PM
Van, thanks so much for the awesome and the lovely comment, so appreciated
Date: 2/19/2016 3:56:00 PM
Lovely BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 5:38:00 PM
James, thanks for the lovely, appreciate !
Date: 2/18/2016 11:42:00 PM
looks like a winning poem. CT
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 2:45:00 AM
Chase, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 2/18/2016 7:07:00 PM
good luck in contest
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 2:46:00 AM
Nathan, thanks for the encouragement, so grateful for your visit ~
Date: 2/18/2016 3:58:00 AM
ohh, i hope i can muster enough grit to write something as beautiful as this, constance... huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 8:50:00 AM
Nette, thanks for visiting with that nice comment, I am sure you will write a beautiful Ellip ~
Date: 2/18/2016 12:43:00 AM
Thanks for this wonderful sample for me to see, Constance. Now I need to try one!!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 1:01:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting, and I am sure you will do one better than mine, darn it !

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