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Sad Silly Boy

What is a silly boy to do? He wants to find a love that's true. Drawn to sexy and so bad. Duty says a wife and mother Still attracted to another. The right choice has left him sad.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 9/11/2014 6:56:00 PM

Sexy and bad, and wife and mother can be the same person, I know for a fact :) I liked your poem ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2014 9:37:00 AM

;0) in reality we like sexy and bad

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/23/2014 10:26:00 AM

Why does the forbidden seem sweeter? You brought this to play in a creative way, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2014 10:43:00 AM

;0)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/5/2012 10:08:00 PM

Nice write. Poor boy, I think he's confused. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2012 11:06:00 PM

Thanks Lucilla.

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/5/2012 7:12:00 PM

poor sad Silly,nice write Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2012 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2012 9:54:00 AM

Hello All Do not be concearned, I am not writing about my own circumstances. I do however appreciate the concern. Have a great day.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2012 8:36:00 PM

Forgive me for wrong assumption, Richard. This is a dilemma no one welcomes. As humans our hearts can be fickle. Always, Annalise

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/4/2012 6:41:00 PM

Damn that thing called duty, spoiling all the fun! LOL

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 6:51:00 PM

Good girl or bad girl Jack???

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/4/2012 6:04:00 PM

yes, it's a conundrum isn't it? I think most of us have had our share of bad 'uns! thanks for commenting on my freestyle haiku, I've expanded on it now :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 6:18:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by, feel free to have a look around. I will go back and see your changes. have a good night.

Don Johnson

Date: 12/4/2012 4:45:00 PM

yes i was attracted to a bad bad gal, her head was in the game as well, but no i wasnt right am i going back tonight, my head is in a twirl.. delight, out if sight, smile curl, orright.... re 'Sad Silly Boy' Richard Lamoureux Don Johnson i have a photo 2

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 6:19:00 PM

Me to but ended up with a good girl who is bad in the right ways. Thanks for commenting.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/4/2012 4:30:00 PM

Life is always about choosing, isn't it? :) nice verses you've got Richard :D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Yanny, glad you like them.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 3:56:00 PM

Richard, wow... i feel as if the choice i make will leave me sad like the poor silly boy in this poem... why does the right choice have to be the right one... i'm in the middle of choosing right now... but i am not going with my heart... i'm going with what peeps want... it is win or lose... anyways~ hope you got my mail... please let me know as soon as you read it... xox~PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 6:20:00 PM

In the end, I still think the heart should win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 3:56:00 PM

soup mail

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/4/2012 3:12:00 PM

the poem looks simple enough, but boy this is complex and intriguing, and i just love it...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Harry, still playing around with unfamiliar forms.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2012 3:02:00 PM

Right choices pay off in the long run..The beautiful woman can make a great wife and mother as well as just the ordinary looking lady who has those great skills already..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 3:04:00 PM

I was fortunate to find the perfect woman. God is certainly good!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 3:01:00 PM

yes, the plight of the silly man!!! Silly women too!!! I enjoyed this.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 12/4/2012 8:46:00 AM

Richard , you have written a wonderful tail-rhyme, oh why are we always attracted to the wrong person, well done. Constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Constance, I so enjoy your visits. Have a great day.