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Sad Ole Moon

The night weighs heavy with sadness as a soft rain falls upon me the stars are hidden i feel the moon is lonely Just a sliver in the darkness his light is barely shining the rain is really tears so alone the moon is crying For sunless was the day the world had been so cruel to glow in the midst of misery he's finding hard to do So I'll just sit out here till morning keep him company sad ole moon you can cry on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2009 6:23:00 PM
Amazing poem here! There is so much feeling and emotion in this writing. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work! Kristin
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Date: 2/6/2009 12:49:00 PM
Sounds like a sad night, but you're offering friendship to the moon, comeradery, which is always great. Terrific rhyme scheme and read. Michael
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Date: 2/6/2009 12:44:00 PM
Ron a wonderful collection of your feelings and emotions wrapped into a great poem. Sadness is hopefully only one day at a time. But I've had one of those days today! Peace & Love Laura :)
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