Sad Moon

~ The crescent moon was frowning when I gazed up at the sky Its glow diminished by the clouds it seemed that it might cry And I was feeling just the same as that old saddened moon While both of us sent wishes that we hope you get well soon ~ For a friend who isn’t feeling well

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 2/3/2020 8:18:00 PM

The thought of the moon frowning over your friend's illness and sending its get well wishes, lovely Chris, hope your friend gets well soon . . .

Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am glad you liked this one. I hope so too.

Jean Bush

Date: 2/3/2020 12:53:00 PM

How very beautiful. How perfectly penned. How is your friend? Wishing all the best.

Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Jean. Still not feeling well but hopefully soon that will change. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/31/2020 4:12:00 PM

I hope your friend gets better God willing.Tonight am going to pray for your friend...whatever the need.God knows.

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. I know you will and I know it will help. You are a good friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2020 10:13:00 PM

So sweet a sentiment, dear friend. I know you have a compassionate heart.

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim. I just try to help when I can.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2020 9:38:00 PM

Very, very sweetly penned, Chris! Hope your friend's no on the mend! Healing thoughts, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 7:30:00 AM

Thanks so much GW. I hope so too.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/30/2020 7:15:00 PM

What a kind gesture to a friend Chris. It must be going around. I seemed to have caught something myself. Hope you have a great night and that your friend feels better soon :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 7:29:00 AM

I am sorry to hear that, I hope you feel so much better my friend. Happy you found this poem and enjoyed it so much and hoping it helped with your illness.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/30/2020 5:28:00 PM

This is a sweet message of thoughts for a friend Chris. I had no idea you wrote this, when I just put in one about the Crescent moon as well, but opposite, with it smiling. I hope all is well. Take care !

Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2020 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I saw yours and it was beautiful.