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Sad Love

*** Looking for right love But love always gets me sad What have I done wrong? I end up in wrong person That’s why I stay single right? * * * * * * Wrong time and wrong place Wrong person I always chase What happen to me? I am in deep misery Gosh, is this my fate really? * * * * * * * * * ***************** 7th Place Winner Tanka Sad Song by: Poet Destroyer's Contest 10.11.12

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 9:22:00 AM

My hearty congratulations on your win my dear Mary! love/hugs:) Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/23/2012 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win Maria xx

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/22/2012 4:56:00 PM

Awesome and fine write,Maria....Good job..Congrats on your superb win...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Maria. Love, Carol XXXX

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/22/2012 9:17:00 AM

Great stuff Maria...many congrats!!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 7:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win! loved being inside your head :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/21/2012 2:45:00 PM

I can relate, congrats on your win Maria

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 11:53:00 AM

Maria, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/19/2012 11:10:00 AM

I sometimes feel the same way. Well out and thank you for your comment. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 7:36:00 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Maria. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Len Gasun

Date: 10/17/2012 7:20:00 PM

Oh, I am so glad to read this my friend! Sorry, I've almost missed it. This is really sad but don't worry my dear, I am pretty sure our time comes and the best will come (smile). Good luck always! hugs:)LG