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We drove down the lushy serene hill side cherishing the cool drive through shaded woods with cascading waterfalls alongside Intoxication by fresh pinewoods made us stop to breathe in the misty woods A decade later this paradise bled horrendously naked in rocky bed Under the dusky sky stood the outline of a dark bare tree with its ribs outspread A forest fire had scorched out all pine May 20, 2016 For Laura Loo

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:36:00 AM
Awesome looking win...skat
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/12/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thanks for finding it awesome, Skat!
Date: 6/1/2016 1:49:00 PM
Balveen, this is really good--a 7 for sure. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/1/2016 2:47:00 PM
Many thanks, Janice!
Date: 5/21/2016 4:45:00 AM
What a great way to bring awareness to such a hazardous problem! Great write and congrats on making the winners list
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/22/2016 8:36:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Brian!
Date: 5/21/2016 12:59:00 AM
Congrats, Balveen, on your win. It was fantastic to pick destruction of nature as your theme. ~karam~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/22/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Karam dear!
Date: 5/20/2016 3:11:00 PM
Destruction of nature, it's very sad poem my lovely friend. Beautifully done. Congratulation my lovely friend. loved always, bl
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Devnath!
Date: 5/20/2016 1:29:00 PM
Balveen, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Luloo!

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