Sad

A silent tear , A silent cry, Is all that I have for now.... Broken hearts nd broken words.... Is all that I see around... for the sun has gone and moon has come.. and the darkness is crawling around.. The path has changed for better or worse..i dnt know... À fear of defeat À thOUght of being hurt iS hauntng me for the sun has gone nd the moon has come...and the darkness is creeping around.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 10:54:00 PM

reshmi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 7:54:00 PM

Reshmi :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Phumlani Mthethwa

Date: 9/29/2014 4:16:00 AM

Sometimes God allows a little pain here and there just to test how much faith and love you have for him. Being hurt unfortunately is part of life. I love the poem, thank you for sharing.

Reshmi Gk
Date: 9/29/2014 5:39:00 AM

Hmm, yea I understand that.but sometimes the pain given by God is unbearable and you just dont have hope of seeing a brighter day, And all you got to do is sit and write what you are going through ....anyways thanks a lot for your comment and I believe you will encourage me in future also. thank you :)