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Sacred Time

Bursting through the trees The Daystar's ephemeral Casting long shadows

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations Terry, on your success in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” poetry contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2009 11:37:00 AM

You really painted a nice picture with the words that you chose. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ascension" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:22:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Terry, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

Date: 11/24/2009 3:08:00 PM

What a creative view. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 4:15:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, TERRY. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LAINIE

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Terry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:54:00 PM

Congrats, Terry, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved winner ... beautiful haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:42:00 PM

Terry, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul