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Sacred Heart

if love was the shackle of humanity how would one illustration The pulse, the beat and cause and effect of sure a Phenomenon would one point this way? Laughter ache movement turns what turn a false it to Tilt water so simply If we are to confess if we are to consume How does the water movement in conjunction or Loss values often moves Turn of century rise of a moon a off and on switch Does it happen over night or revolt to a new conclusion Then how did one off spring come to matter A turn or a smirk how does it make one feel Is feeling a lack of emotion or lack of professing Who am one to judge or deem to dismiss Honor or glory capture for a year man or chump who claim Such glory passion or rusk does it ring a bell but at the end of a Battle who is deem a winner what lesson has been Told or point for point discrete.

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Date: 10/28/2016 4:34:00 PM
wonderful title for a wonderful write, Louis. lainey
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:31:00 PM
Hi Louis, Awesome first post, You must be an accomplished writer. Hope to see you FLOURISH among this rock-solid community of amateur poets. You are going to love it here. Fast;) Linda
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:08:00 PM
Louis,, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. **SKAT**
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