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Sabatage

try to get it right battlefield of thoughts gone wrong my mind is the fight excrete pools of sweat gasping for life’s very last breath ... dream of death again peaceful slumber nights sabotaged dreams infiltrate awake to take flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/28/2014 9:01:00 PM
This trio of senryu entries collectively convey vivid images to the minds of any readers.
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/28/2014 9:38:00 PM
thank you Robert , I love it when a reader like you and myself can get right into what it is he / she has wrote , please read more

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