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I just have to keep walking, I am tired and sun's set, It's dark and I am lost, But I cannot rest my feet, Lay back awhile and breathe easy Or ask someone my way home. When did I go astray? Was I young and naïve, Or stupid, whimsical and rowdy? Wasting time in vain pursuits; Now, too late to regret. So I will walk Until to the end -- Where will it end? I just not know. Who to call? Who will help... Other than God? Oh God, I beseech, HELP! ~10/14/14 ~Andrea Dietrich "I Do Not Know" Contest.

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Date: 10/25/2014 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Abdul.
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:08:00 AM
Well penned piece, Abdul, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:40:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Abdul:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2014 1:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Abdul. A few lines were awkward but generally this poem had a very good theme and I love how you used symbolism. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:44:00 PM
powerful, gripping piece that makes me walk with you, abdul... simply beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 10/17/2014 5:50:00 PM
Like I always say: I value your opinion. Thanks a lot.

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