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S a T U R N

S*A*T*U*R*N Slinging our way through your ice-ball halos, Around your myriad shepherding moon rocks, Tiger-stripe ice cream body below Undulates in a tidal, hypnotizing rhythm, Rocking our slender ship. No sane artist could imagine you. May 29, 2021

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2021 1:30:00 PM

excellent ink, love the description, many congrats on your win Phil:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/21/2021 9:01:00 AM

Very creative - especially the final line which perfectly catches the imaginative twist of your fine Acrostic. Congratulations! Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/20/2021 11:14:00 PM

A great acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!

Matt Caliri

Date: 11/20/2021 8:57:00 PM

Congrats on a 9th place finish on my Planets poem from ages ago. Incredible taut write, fabulous word choice. First line really grabbed me.

Phil Capitano
Date: 3/31/2022 5:42:00 AM

Thanks Matt, I had forgotten about this contest.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/29/2021 7:15:00 PM

An original description of a beautiful planet. Thanks for posting it. / Maurice

Judy Ball

Date: 5/30/2021 7:36:00 AM

Excellent Phil. Really great imagery and good description. Love it. God Bless, JB

Phil Capitano
Date: 5/31/2021 4:02:00 AM

Thanks Judy for the love. :)

Peter Baldwin

Date: 5/30/2021 6:43:00 AM

I dig this. Very unique topic and week written