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Rythm of the Falls

Cascading water Natures untamed melody Soothing to the soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2009 10:48:00 AM
Love this one. I can see, feel, and hear this fall. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2009 8:24:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Erica! Good luck in the contest! Peace, audrey
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:41:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Erica. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 12:35:00 PM
Sounds like soft music! Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:59:00 AM
I can hear it, Erica. :)
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:14:00 AM
This is very nice...I like the "untamed melody" Good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 10/13/2009 8:43:00 AM
What a lovely image, complete with its own unique soundtrack. Very nice, Erica! Love, Carolyn
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