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Rusty Playground

I bent my mind around her ideas became engrossed by playful words Yet the thoughts were so horrific my tears flowed and eyes were blurred Sandbox baby playing laughter and childish sounds the weight of pain enormous as a parent's joy turned into frowns Sandbox baby oh so precious is society to blame The blur of pretty pictures on dumb-phones adults play games But the boogie man he's a watching invisible to mommies sight no one really expects him When skies are shining bright He snatches away her precious a day that was filled with smiles In the matter of just a few moments Her sandbox baby is far from her eyes Sobs of her desperation as the rest hold their babies tight thank God it wasn't them still not a one will rest this night The playground now seems broken the sandcastles have turned to dust The swings in the wind are swinging we watch as metal turns to rust The ghost of sand box baby A nightmare birthed destroyed her dream Laughter that once had been gifted makes way for an endless scream! When the taker is so cruel try not to judge the ones we see Know that it could easily happen pray to God not you or me Everyone has their distractions pain of regret they didn't save Watch for the distracted watchers help sandbox baby avoid the grave! Inspired by Casarah Nance's poem titled "Sandbox Baby" please read her outstanding piece!!

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Date: 10/20/2016 6:42:00 PM
Powerful poem, Richard. Very penetrating truth and perception of an evil reality. Ty for enlightening everyone, also ty to Casarah for inspiring you w/this gem of a poem. Much love always from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)
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Date: 10/18/2016 6:41:00 AM
We do not take the care of our children as we used to do We assume and that is sad No one has the time and so many are lost It was good of you to remind people of the tragedy that can occur in a heart beat A great big 7 from me Love mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2016 8:19:00 AM
Good morning! Thanks and a big hug. Love back to you mom.
Date: 10/16/2016 5:34:00 PM
Wow, I am so speechless... thankyou...hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 7:30:00 PM
Ha ha, this is not the first time I have had this experience with you.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/16/2016 6:03:00 PM
I've been told I cause a lot of people to do many things, contemplate is a new one on my list...lol
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 5:56:00 PM
Hugs back to you Casarah. You caused me to contemplate.
Date: 10/16/2016 11:50:00 AM
Very deep & meaningful write Richards. Well presented every line. A7 from me.......//hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 10/16/2016 10:14:00 AM
Unsettling, this is a veritable fear. I have read Casarah's poem, moving follow-up.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Paloma.
Date: 10/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Very sad truth, Richard...feel really bad at such cruel crimes...will read Casarah's... If you find time, check out my poem ''is that her mistake?"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 9:48:00 AM
I Will Jo, thanks for commenting.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 9:47:00 AM
Good morning Eileen, Casarah's poem points to our vulnerability. Hugs Rick. Thanks for heading to Casarah's poem.
Date: 10/16/2016 9:42:00 AM
It saddens me so much that for the most part parenting has gone way of the past. Idiot boxes, video games, dumb phones are watching over our youth. A two parent working society with an 18 yr old au pair in charge. We need to build our kids, steer them and instill values in them. Great poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Tim. I feel bad for parents, we humans have always been attracted to pretty baubles.
Date: 10/16/2016 9:29:00 AM
This tugs at the heart so strongly, Richard. How can people be so cruel? Will head over to Casandra's poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 9:49:00 AM
Hi Eileen, look up to Jo Daniel. My comment jumped up. Bonus hug.

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