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Rusted

Reduced to nuggets of the dacoit time Under the burden of spent splendour Shattered silhouette in a shabby corner The inexorable skeleton of lovely life Entreats the Grim Reaper for mercy Daffodils look at you in trembling awe _________________________________________ June 17, 2016

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Date: 6/22/2016 4:02:00 PM
I like the way you addressed the theme, Probir. Great imagery of the 'rusted' subject in the photo in such few words. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2016 3:35:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/17/2016 12:48:00 PM
I know you will do awesome in this contest....skat
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 3:06:00 AM
Welcome prediction ... Thank you Skat ...

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