Rust

Rust is corrosion The colour of autumn leaves Nature’s way of erosion Perpetually weaves. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/21/2012 7:27:00 PM

I like your entry, how you compare it to leaves. I never would have thought of that! btw, do you think rick is ever going to judge this contest??? I entered one too and the wait is killing me ;P

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/11/2012 11:55:00 PM

I miss the leaves changing colors. Unfortunately my new home in Florida does not believe in seasons...but it's got Hella- palm trees....Still, it makes good weather for Poet Trees!

Janet Vick

Date: 1/7/2012 6:10:00 AM

Short and very descriptive of rust. I like the comparision to autumn leave.... Take care. Janet

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/26/2011 6:38:00 PM

Good use of rhyme here. Hope you have a happy New Year. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2011 9:08:00 PM

Harry...good luck in the contest... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/24/2011 6:52:00 AM

insightful one gives messages. Thanks for this and wish you Sweet Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Yer 2012, my lovely friend. bl

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/23/2011 7:20:00 PM

So much said in so few words, excellent.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/23/2011 8:19:00 AM

You have such an easy way of bringing your point across Harry.. I just love that.. Thank you for always dropping in on my side!! Merry Christmas to you and a fabulous 2012 ahead ;) love Wilma