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Rust-Ruined Rivers

When time has shifted white gates lost passion and rust-ruined rivers run before your door false truths be thrown to lie upon your floor nasty, dead fish - stink, as lies, no more. Stenched karma from which liars smell - dipped in batter deep fried in hell forehead branded recipes of blamed lies, you deny-while your tongue chokes as it swells bones swallowed of which fish you forgot you had long ago caught; truth's vapors seeping out your pores rust-ruined rivers rush in once more as the sea greets the shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/8/2009 4:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading thank you Regina. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2009 8:13:00 PM
Tim, I have posted here before; a couple of years ago - I have grown since then. I post on Poetsphere.org and have developed from the help of my peers. Poetsphere.org is fairly new and has a select few members of which would be much better if more persons who are serious about poetry and constructive critisism would join. The members helped me beyond what I would have ever expected from myself. Thanks for reading.
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Date: 11/7/2009 6:25:00 AM
Another gem!! Great allegory...I assume you are new to the Soup? If so....Welcome! Looking forward to reading more! - Tim
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