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Rush of Summer's Breeze

Love songs softly flow on a Summer's breeze, Lyrics trilled by doves in sweet melodies. My vagabond heart meanders no more for you've given yours to me, mon amour.* Your kisses assuage my hunger and thirst. Deluged by emotions, my heart shall burst. A treasure, no longer beyond my reach. A prayer answered when I did beseech. You are the brightest star in midnight's sky Keeper of my heart when I've need to sigh. In celestial dreams; ever at my side, where love abounds in incessant flood tide. Come with me, my love, across tranquil seas Sails swept by the mild rush of Summer's breeze *mon amour: my love May 7, 2021 Summer Love Sonnet Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 5/24/2021 9:36:00 AM
Lovely sonnet Jenna congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2021 9:06:00 AM
such a sensational sonnet jenna, adding his to my faves for when I dip my toe in the water and try to write a romantic poem, many congrats on your win!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2021 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful write for your twin flame, Jenna! A fave!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/24/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker. I appreciate the lovely thoughts and the fave.
Date: 5/16/2021 3:44:00 AM
This is really nice and cool, Jenna:) I am still working on mine, find it so difficult to write a romantic poem :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/24/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 5/7/2021 6:15:00 PM
Lovely, so genuine! I do love sonnets, plus this does not rehash old sentiments of love. Very fresh, amplifying the poem’s new love so described. A penning to be proud of. Hugs, sally
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/8/2021 7:29:00 AM
Hi, Sally, and thank you very much for such gracious and kind compliments.
Date: 5/7/2021 5:37:00 PM
"Sails swept by the mild rush of Summer's breeze" I love it Jenna, Wow! Nice powerful ending.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/8/2021 7:28:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your great comment, Mark. I appreciate it.
Date: 5/7/2021 1:39:00 PM
A well written sonnet full of romance and to be with the love of your life on the calm water is pure bliss. Hope you're well Jenna and hope you have a bright weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/7/2021 1:54:00 PM
Four bells and all is well with me, Tom. I hope you have a warm and sunny weekend. Thanks for your review...what a wonderful way to spend the Summer, sailing the sea with a love.
Date: 5/7/2021 12:49:00 PM
Exquisite dreamlike sonnet Jenna, your poem flowing like the picture it paints, away from mania, chilling on the breeze, life can be good, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/7/2021 1:18:00 PM
I agree, David. To be so in love that nothing or no one else matters... Thanks for reading me and leaving your thoughts.
Date: 5/7/2021 7:37:00 AM
This poem gives us the peak of love emotion. Well done.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/7/2021 9:34:00 AM
I am so very pleased that you think so, Victor. Thank you.

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