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Rural Thoughts

Shadows deep Hold secrets swarming Within an untold mind Reach for Aspens Painted on portraits Viewed by the Leaping sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/5/2016 4:03:00 PM
I love this one Rhoda, natures artist is the one true master...
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Rhoda Galgiani
Date: 11/6/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you for the comment and the read. Means a lot to me that my poetry is becoming to another artist...rg
Date: 11/1/2016 8:57:00 PM
You said a lot with such few words.
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Rhoda Galgiani
Date: 11/1/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you again - yes, I have been known to be a bit 'Gabby'. Best to you...rg
Date: 10/31/2016 11:37:00 AM
This was beautiful, the scene it creates is vivid and I can relate. There are always secrets in the shadows which eventually will be revealed.
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Rhoda Galgiani
Date: 10/31/2016 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for your comment - yes shadows can be very secretive, good and bad. Let's hope the dark shadows stay hidden...LOL rg
Date: 10/28/2016 3:48:00 PM
I like this one.
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Rhoda Galgiani
Date: 10/28/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you for the read and comment. Looking forward to reading you also...rg

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