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Running Out of Time

As I look down from here I feel like I am falling That is when I realize It’s you my friend calling I go out on a limb To gather my harvest I must make it through Winter is the hardest I have to climb up higher To reach the best crop But you my old friend Always cause me to stop I know you’re always with me So I'm begging for your help But I am still afraid I’m just talking to myself It’s starting to get colder This summer was no fun I have to get more food Before this season's done I’ll ask you once again And face you with courage Please leave me alone While I put food in storage I can hear you laughing You think I’m just squirrely I go through this each year This fear makes my head swirly I’ll go out a little more I won’t look down, I'm fine My friend you can’t go with me I’m running out of time Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend *inspired by Matt's Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever contest

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Date: 5/26/2009 7:22:00 AM
excellent read and great poetic flow thanks fo rthe comment
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:22:00 PM
Quite interesting indeed, the personification of yourself in a microscopic forestal creature, yep, nice nice nice!!!! A squirrel in a hurry and feeling blue, that's quite a sight!!! Thanks a lot for sharing and for the experience C=
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:53:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, Lena! Took me awhile to catch on (smile) but squirrely I can be ... LOL ...
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:42:00 AM
Hi Loita, your poem is very interesting. This is nice use of the quatrain form, too. Matt's contest is quite a challenge. Sooo, am I to assume that you are afraid of heights? Don't worry friend of a little squirrel, you'll be alright. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing, Love, Dane
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful! The flow is very nice. Very good read and thanks for the comment. Nate
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Date: 5/17/2009 4:21:00 PM
Sounds like an excellent entry for Matt's contest! If it's some kind of metaphor and I am totally off here, my apologies! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:38:00 PM
This is a delightful write. :)
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:13:00 PM
Lolita, this poem really moved me. I have a dear friend who died a couple years ago and I always talk to her when I go fishing (as I did today). Before she died, she promised to send red grouper my way. I miss her, but on days like today I always look to the sky and ask Jeanett, "Where's big red?" I know she's listening. Your poem is such an inspiration! Love, Carolyn
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