Home » Poems » John Fenn » Running On Empty

Running On Empty

Got me a brand new electrical car The range aint no good I can’t go very far It never quite reaches the places I need I reckon I’m wanting A much longer lead

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/16/2011 9:37:00 AM

Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/16/2011 9:37:00 AM

Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.

Zzzzz Zzzzz
Date: 6/16/2011 9:39:00 AM

Pardon the hick-hick-hick-up. My computer is on the blink!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/16/2011 9:36:00 AM

Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.

Mike Dailey

Date: 5/18/2011 12:04:00 PM

I like this

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 11:56:00 AM

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

Lakisa Battie

Date: 5/18/2011 11:55:00 AM

Brilliant expressions in your write I would liked to have more of this write to read...m