Running

You can make me feel atop the world It doesn't take much at all. Then you rip me right back down I think you like to see me fall. Boost by boost you build me up then suddenly I feel it coming. You turned against me one more time I should have started running.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2016 2:21:00 AM

Such an insightful write Monica:-) People play with our emotions Monica especially in a relationship ... one minute we are on top of the world the next we fall from a great height:-( hugs Jan xx

Steven Henderson

Date: 11/4/2016 5:28:00 AM

Nah stand your ground and shine your light because it's stunning! Peace unto you with many blessings.

Lilly Davis

Date: 11/3/2016 12:19:00 PM

I like this poem a lot Care to be friends? I hoesnty can relate You can read some on my poems Or whatever they are They suck tho

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/3/2016 11:47:00 AM

This poem shows a lot. Well put.

Monica Vance
Date: 11/3/2016 11:53:00 AM

Thank you.