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Runners High

(circa 2011) Tip toe, tip toe. Going nowhere fast- Rave for your lives, before it all burns and crash. Divide your feelings amongst the ones that you believe should matter. Don't mind the shrugs, the pointless chatter. Tip toe. must go. run, into the fear. its the only way to get there. faster faster. taking things slow, is to saying no to the possibilities beyond the trees. Before it disappears below the pavement. tip toe is the fear.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2016 2:47:00 AM

Amanda,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2016 12:25:00 AM

OMG, what an amazing ABC poem, Amanda,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*