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Runaway

R eady to bolt U nable to stay N obody seems to care A ngry, and full of dismay W ill they come looking A nyone at all, I wipe a tear from my eye Y esterday is all that remains to remember me by For Andrea Dietrich's Skipping Six, Going Straight to Seven- Acrostics challenge #3

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Michael Alexander

Date: 2/17/2014 3:38:00 PM

I get an eerie feeling of abandonment, when i read this. I like the strength of that feeling. - Mike.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/15/2013 4:23:00 PM

Great poem, and a winner too. Nicely done.

Donna Jones

Date: 10/31/2013 8:28:00 PM

Hey this is great......I see belated congratulations are in order too....

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/21/2013 10:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Very good write.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/14/2013 2:05:00 AM

This is a good read and congratulations on your win

David Williams

Date: 10/13/2013 10:14:00 AM

hey sis, I like this very much but I can you I would come looking, very well done and good luck...David

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/13/2013 8:20:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2013 6:54:00 PM

Hi Cecilia, just dropping by to say hello.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2013 2:54:00 PM

heartbreaking write - so glad it was a winner

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/10/2013 8:14:00 AM

So well done! Congratulations on your win. The answer is yes we will! Have a great day Cecilia.

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:15:00 PM

Hi Cecilia.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/8/2013 2:35:00 PM

Cecilia, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! So sad...no one should be forgotten...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2013 11:23:00 AM

Hello Lovely Cecilia, , congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2013 10:32:00 AM

love this, clever poetry, with sentiment....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2013 3:32:00 PM

.... a tear from my eye to....well done - Luck in contest, Cecilia !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2013 12:16:00 AM

this was a great acrostic on the plight of the lonely runaway. Thanks for doing this acrostic and congrats for your win.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/3/2013 3:57:00 PM

Hi Cecilia, A lovely acrostic..Good luck.. Ken

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2013 8:21:00 AM

Good morning Cecilia, great Acroustic. I think Andrea will like this one. Take care, hugs Rick

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/30/2013 9:49:00 PM

Very good for the contest. Good luck and thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 9/30/2013 5:27:00 PM

† Yesterday Is A Memory Tomorrow Be A Dream Everlasting What's My Name ? Hang In There Baby Girl, It's Going To Be Just Fine ˜ Love, John