Run For Your Lives--Them's Fightin' Words

How long I've ached; how deep the sore! My albino Soul- suffers blisters... For with myself, I am at War Run for your lives- Poetic Sisters! Dodge the bullets; avoid the mines- Watch the sky for falling bombs! Oh, worry not, for all is fine- It's just a little Napalm :) Hydrogen, he's just a friend- But atomic at his center Radiation, Tunguska station- Do not fear (it's safe to enter...) The fray; the fight Fought day and night Unending battle- forever addled (And no end in sight!)

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Jared Pickett

Date: 2/18/2014 11:00:00 AM

Excellent!! Your style is similar to the styling of my father.. Richard Pickett, I believe he is still on here. Your poem flowed and kept my intrigue. The last verse was spectacular.. Good work my friend.Asavvy1

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/18/2014 11:26:00 AM

Many thanks, Jared. I will have to look him up. I see a lot of myself in your pieces thus far and also a great deal of talent. Very happy I met you. Thanks for the read and reply :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/24/2013 2:00:00 PM

Chan This is a strong piece that is well written and makes the reader see the ideas you have coming from your soul. Great job my friend I'm glad my Old Habits poem you could connect too, hopefully in a good way. Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 2:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for the flowing review, Robin; I appreciate it so much <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/13/2013 5:24:00 PM

AH yes, I am totally ready to engage in your little war. Bring it !

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/14/2013 8:13:00 AM

Gear up, Karen, and join me in the trenches ;) <3

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/11/2013 1:33:00 PM

Another imaginative poem from Arhaic. That's excellent. I like your style. Check out a poem I'm writing right now, dedicated to you: Rhyme Master.JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/11/2013 1:59:00 PM

Thanks as always, Joseph; I will definitely check out your new piece :)