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Run a Way Train

Coocoo chacoo! Well, you’d think a blithering idiot got hold of my governor controls…….. You’d think Watt had never invented a throttle for my mouth Of course, no one ever has, and doubts exists anyone could ever muzzle me with a full head of righteous steam ready to blow. Issues well, there are few civilization doesn’t seem in my mind able to get a grip on without a damn good tongue lashing! Like why does one faith think they’re “tapped” for heaven and the rest of us peons are damned to hell? How come some folks think skin color determines brain power or sex determines ..any kind of power….oh yeah… there’s a bit a steam coming out of my ears now! The cogs in my cerebellum are spinning like a pinwheel cracker on the fourth of July! And how come there’s a surprise when kids raised in a dictatorship school system come out not being able to think for their self’s? Yup, the lips are flappin’ and the eyes are buggin’ and the soap box in Covent Gardens better watch out!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/22/2010 12:37:00 PM
got your message. john
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:29:00 PM
Hey, John??? I have no idea what you think that has to do with the poem but...strong is a relative term...I'd match my will to yours anyday! LOL God make me and I am made of God and I am God ;)
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:21:00 PM
facts 1. men are generally stronger than women. 2. God made a solution for the problem of sin. 3. and if you don't like it, then it's just too bad. lol john
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:15:00 AM
I got some chuckles out of this one- and I am impressed you know what a governor is!!
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:57:00 AM
You said a lot with this one, Deb. Of course, you know that I admire your straightforward honesty to your thoughts and emotions. You have hit many pertinent points on the head with this one. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:37:00 PM
Great thoughts that you have penned in this one...I especially like the last five lines...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...About retiring and be my love...I was thinking about my husband when I wrote it...Sara
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:52:00 PM
Hope you feel better...:) Thanks for your comments today.
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:22:00 AM
Hey, hey Ms. Guzzi-how've ya been?!! A clever Slam/Personification/Monolouge here...I really liked how you phrased everything in sort of a "local color" venacular-good stuff darlin!!
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Date: 5/17/2010 6:31:00 PM
I love your Slam, you are good at this form.. I am sending you soup mail.. constance
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:49:00 PM
This is a great one TEACH ... good luck.. I know Irma personally from the other website and she is full of fun and so I feel like a runaway train today... romance OVER ... taking the train outta here... luv.. Linda-Marie (humble pupil)..sometimes..haha..
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:40:00 PM
if this is a good day, i'd hate to see you in bad day - great work. I laughed and loved it. to frustrate you further, what do you think is worse, the school systems or our government(s)? thank you, chuck
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:32:00 AM
Did you think I was full of sunshine and lollipops? nawwwww P*ss and vinegar...alot of the time LOL.
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:29:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, enjoyed, and thank you for the comment for my pm., take care,..p.d.
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