Get Your Premium Membership

Rum's Remorse

I stand in front Of a mirror and cringe My body is bare I went on a binge Did I bare my heart? Did I give away the ring? My wedding is ruined The ring is missing! The drinks I’ve had All took a strange course It was just a drink That became rum’s remorse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/1/2021 4:32:00 PM
The ring on the table is not the one you are looking for! Very good!
Login to Reply
Abdool Avatar
Justin Abdool
Date: 2/2/2021 7:18:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Kim. Yes, you are totally right it is not! Have a great day!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things