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Rummaging Memoirs

Rummaging my dreams from a treasure chest I hug Snoopy and Troll dolls one last time, They knew my little secret childhood crime So I tagged their backs with hums, sublime And no one understood my tight unrest. Opening a box, keepsakes fell somehow Velvet frocks saw my look, a tender pain, And more for sale; my heart started to rain Oh memoirs I had to let go…again, As teapot brewed, feeling alright for now. A classic watch peeped like a dangling star It’s glass frame broken, yet alive and warm, Dad slow-dancing me in the blue rainstorm I saved this above all, without doubt or norm Cherishing his touch so near, though skies afar. Anthony Slausen's Treasure Chest Contest

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Date: 9/9/2013 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful heart of treasure where memories are there in your chest. A nice picture you have drawn how past memories can be rummaged. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:22:00 PM
awesome write, Nette - a winner for sure
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:44:00 PM
You have written a gorgeous write my friend! I really loved the tenderhearted treasure chest you have written about, so full of emotions and dreams of the past! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:10:00 AM
Darn!...that's good. Your poems are always so lovely and ....dreamy. I've never read one that I didn't enjoy, Nette.
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:49:00 AM
I understand the emotions in this piece all too well...wonderful job.
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