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Rum Bottle

Mutineer’s rum drank Message in the bottle sank Captain walked the plank By Robb A. Kopp

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/21/2010 5:22:00 AM

You have made my day brighter with this Senryu thank you. I wish you a day of love, sunshine and inspiration beyond your wildest dreams Robb. Thank you for sharing your poetry today. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2010 1:37:00 PM

Hey you LOL I do kinda remember George Burns and Gracey Allen BUT why did you say to me "Eat your heart out Gracey..." on my verse Go Ask Alice...just interest! (Senryu doesn't rhyme, and it doesn't need a title. Senryu is a Japanese form of poetry similar to the haiku, since it is made up of only three lines with the same syllable pattern of 5-7-5. It is the subject matter that makes a senryu different. A senryu dwells on people matters; it can even be funny!(You got that part!)