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Ruins

man in alley discarded lives alone wind sings harsh song winter calls he bears weight old worn coat he dreams of a home dreams he coat worn old weight he bears calls winter song harsh sings wind alone lives discarded alley in man

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Date: 3/1/2016 3:47:00 PM
oh I see what you have done here. Isn't this palindrome? Something like that? Where you mirror the top half of the poem? I want to find another one like that first one i read today. I really like this one, by the way.
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