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I live in a rural setting close to a small town..Not a big city..DEA did a drug bust over the week end..

. Drug bust Few arrested Two pushers_man and wife Meth the drug being sold and used Ruined In honor of Brian's contest, Up to five /any theme

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2011 9:54:00 AM

did you know them? Co-man ok?

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/28/2011 10:28:00 AM

Lots of information in so few lines. Well told Sara. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/27/2011 6:20:00 PM

Sadly, this type of thing is being seen all over the country. You packed quite a punch into five lines, Sara. Great message. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/27/2011 4:55:00 PM

amazing the amount of info one can pack into this form. Very good

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2011 4:52:00 PM

nice entry Sara.. much luck .. this happens so much in the inner cities my friend.. nice presentation...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2011 12:32:00 PM

Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Sara. I enjoyed reading yours today. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 10/27/2011 6:42:00 AM

Very nice use of the form to describe this sad incident Sara.Enjoyed. Best wishes.

Nathan D.

Date: 10/27/2011 6:31:00 AM

damn that meth anyways. great cinquain good luck in contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2011 12:53:00 AM

Like something you may have just seen on the news (almost any day of the week sadly!) Good luck in the contest, Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/26/2011 3:16:00 PM

Yeah, what a waste of someones life, doing or selling drugs! Such a destructive thing! Excellent subject for great originality! Awesome job!!

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 10/26/2011 1:23:00 PM

a man and wife? wow.. will at least they were in it together :( this kinda reminds of that jim carrey movie dick and jane where normal folks loose their jobs and end up doig abnormal means to pay for their life style, i wonder if they were one of those cases. (funny movie but the reality harsh)