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Ruhe/ Silence/ Paz

Ruhe kehrt jetzt ein Wenn die Gedanken schlafen Nach bewegtem Tag ---------------------------------------- Now silence returns When thoughts are finally asleep After a hard day ---------------------------------------- Ahora vuelve la paz Cuando duermen los pensamientos Después de un día difícil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2010 7:29:00 AM
Hey there Gert, I had to choose the one that had sleep in it to reply to your night cap thing.. Luckily my sleep returned over the weekend, hold thumps that it sticks around.. otherwise I'll have to try your remedy ;) tc and enjoy your day.. btw what is the time difference between SA and where you are at? Wilma
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Date: 7/1/2010 5:20:00 PM
Excellent work here! I cherish those silent times after a hard days work.
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:06:00 PM
PEACEFUL THINKING AND SLEEPING, A VERY NICE SENRYU, TAKE CARE-SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2010 8:58:00 PM
VEry nice, I love this feeling!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/28/2010 6:36:00 PM
interesting Senyru.... got me to thinking about thoughts and...sleep.
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:47:00 PM
we saw a fireworks display tonight from afar and free. It was different with no noise...Like no sound on the tv.
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:35:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the renditions and translations. There is so much reality in these few lines. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:50:00 AM
Such a peaceful quality to this lovely senryu, Gert. Putting those thoughts to sleep has always been a struggle for me, Gert, especially after a hard day. But when finally the "silence returns," we approach the gateway to beautiful dreams. Wonderful write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/26/2010 6:20:00 AM
Wondeful Mr. Gert.. i miss reading your poetry,, Have not been on much lately now that it is summer,,,yes the thoughts are gone and the sound of sleep sounds good,..enjoyed, have a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/26/2010 5:53:00 AM
intriguing write.........i feel this way when I'm exhausted...i love how you word it...great poem...^_^ v
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Date: 6/26/2010 5:49:00 AM
Oh bliss of the night of rest and dreams..Enjoyed..Sara
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