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I loved you … like water - dove, swam, immersed drowned like breath out, in, saturated gasping unseen but essential impalpable, yet vital my sea - deep, boundless, capricious blue … terrifying my sky - vast, moody, dazzling blue … and dark you … were my element - oxygen for my fire breeze to kiss my cheek a stream to cool … and christen the expanse to cast my sails upon you … were my aliment - manna from the heavens my sustenance and I … devoured you for ‘til that moment I’d never known the meaning … hunger. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, October 27, 2022

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