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Rude Reaction

Blade-edged words, attack me and my, soft, sensitive soul. cuts and wounds all over. you defeat me, with one sharp blow. I sink to the earth, and melt through. yet you think that, I am to be blamed, for the cold shoulder, cold stares you give me. half a hundred, heartbeats later, you still remain stone. I can't believe, you left in silence. no words to explain, your rude reaction... why do you have to be, so selfish and ignorant. I just hate it when, you go all silent. another half a hundred, heartbeats later, I realize, your hurt to me, hurt you even more. and no you're gone, I can't bring you back. and fortune, is very unfortunate...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/22/2016 8:47:00 AM
Stuck in the middle donno what do to that's mine and your situation love your poems..queen:)
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Dark Queen Mh
Date: 5/24/2016 8:28:00 AM
Love yours too..flames:)

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