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Ruby Showers

I spent my day shopping for rubies. Shades of magenta, crimson, maroon sparkling in the ocean of my options as stars which would make me swoon. The old manager tried his best to understand my specific details, yet I couldn't explain my vision, much to his chagrin at drooping sales. Shimmering ruby crystals in his ancient shop with legacies of their own and fancy cost, onlooking my tainted desire to find a gem didn't resemble the magic of the one I'd lost. A ruby with shades that glitter in light reflecting infinite rays of sepia desire to fill my room with colours glowing bright on my white canvas with a whispering fire. I decided to look somewhere else for my ruby and didn't tell him more of my coloured vision, for his suspicious eyes revealed his doubts in my unrealistic mist of flickering indecision. I stepped out of his shop to be welcomed by a magenta streak of twilight in the sky. Ah! That was the shade I'd been looking for, it twirled to let lilac and lavender clouds fly. The floating clouds hovered above the shop to form a bubble of light that danced in dark, then swooshed to enter a desolate old ruby next to the counter now lit with a spark. Amazed, I'd found my precious stone at last. I brought it cocooned in a delicate blue cover to my room that glistens with magical ruby showers adorning my sepia dreams on canvas like a lover. July 13, 2020 First Line Prompt - 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward ~Winner: 9th Place

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Date: 7/29/2020 7:22:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 7/29/2020 2:44:00 AM
Well done for your win!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:41:00 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest Julia! :)
Date: 7/28/2020 6:21:00 PM
I enjoyed your magical tale filled with color, gemstone treasures, and mystical celestial guidance to just the right ruby. Congratulations on your win, Aditi ~ John
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:41:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed my words John. Your generous analysis of my muse and kind appreciation encourages me dear friend. Blessings :)
Date: 7/28/2020 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful images! I can feel it to be true. Well described, Aditi. Lots of apt descriptions for the light of stone.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:40:00 AM
Glad you loved it Sigrid. Thanks for your visit and appreciation :)
Date: 7/14/2020 4:06:00 AM
This is such a terrific tale; good luck in the contest my friend!
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating my efforts Caren. Love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 11:06:00 PM
I guess it turned out to be a 'Red-Letter-Day' after all. Lovely denouement, Aditi. Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 7/14/2020 2:28:00 AM
Indeed Gershon. Thanks for your lovely appreciation and blessings. Have a good day :)
Date: 7/13/2020 7:36:00 AM
Well composed Aditi, glad you found it. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Tom. Blessings! :)
Date: 7/13/2020 5:16:00 AM
Colorful beauty that you've written. I appreciate your gorgeous words. God bless you
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for your generous appreciation Gina. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 3:38:00 AM
Very colourful ruby poem, Aditi, beautiful in its imagery and your choice of words is beyond par:) great work:)
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Date: 7/13/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Jo :) Much love!

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