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Rubies For Her

I spent my day shopping for rubies I was on tenterhooks to make a choice Rubies displayed on shelves glittered And seeing the price tags I lost my voice! Rubies' purity measured in carats Their colors linked to zodiac sign It was not easy job to choose one With so many variations, I pined. Seeing me grim, girl on counter smiled "May I help you", she calmed me down Given my budget, zodiac sign of my love She helped me zero on to a Ruby crown. Thanking her profusely, I left the gem store A full day had been spent to buy this Ruby Gleefully, my love accepted my day's labor Hugged me like a scooby dooby do booby. I let go of shopping pains, felt great A candle light dinner in down town As a return gift, I will cherish it forever I am now more confident shopping a crown. 25.7.2020

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Date: 7/29/2020 7:12:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 AM
Thanx Beata.
Date: 7/28/2020 1:47:00 PM
Loved the beautifully penned muse Mohan. The end is so delightful. Congratulations on your win! Keep writing and inspiring :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 AM
Aditi, thanx.
Date: 7/27/2020 5:56:00 AM
Mohan, this is absolutely delightful--especially line 16! Janice
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/1/2020 3:53:00 AM
Janice, thanx for appreciating.

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