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blushing teenager ruby cheeks, cerise hot lips, given coral rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/10/2021 11:11:00 PM
Oh such a joy to read this adorable Senryu dear Victor ~ thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/10/2021 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Victor. You're image and words are perfect :)
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Date: 1/10/2021 12:25:00 PM
I like the comment "colorful and adorable" that fits it exactly.
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Date: 1/10/2021 9:11:00 AM
Bright, colorful and beautiful Victor.. Have a blessed day ~ Ani
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Date: 1/9/2021 8:25:00 PM
Colorful and adorable! :=)
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Date: 1/9/2021 7:18:00 PM
Victor, A Senryu flushed in bright color. Fresh in blush as any sunset. -Richard
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Date: 1/9/2021 12:29:00 PM
- Very sweet, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2021 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful Victor. So much said in so few words. Excellent as always. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/9/2021 11:01:00 AM
Cerise hot lips, unique and super cool phrase.
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Date: 1/9/2021 10:42:00 AM
Very descriptive work. Way to go if for a contest. I appreciate your kind review of my work. Sara
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Date: 1/9/2021 9:07:00 AM
Great imagery and feelings, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/9/2021 5:50:00 AM
And she loved it--that was the start of a great romance. Lovely poem, Victor.
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Date: 1/9/2021 5:08:00 AM
WoW! Victor, In a few words, you penned a very romantic write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 1/9/2021 4:20:00 AM
Quite a romantic senyru Victor, girls love flowers. Tom
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