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I write with trepidation, Remembering the words Sealed waxen with passion, The pen trembles in my palm, Again I feel faint with desire, My declarations are wanton, Although I dare not reveal Such blatant thoughts! My breath is deep Likened to your words, Although I hold no education, Of passion and love I have Much knowledge. This verse is my open heart Each letter a declaration Of love’s intentions Sent on a wish of Perfumed aspirations Sealed diligently With a pious vow Your muse to Write as you will..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 9:05:00 AM
enjoyed your poem, have a nice day,..p.d.
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:50:00 AM
I enjoyed this greatly. You have a gift with words:)
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Date: 9/28/2010 10:45:00 PM
A WELL COMPOSED POEM PAULA , WELCOME TO THIS SITE ! -Raj
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Date: 9/28/2010 7:04:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Paula. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:49:00 AM
Nice introspective thoughts on writing. You are on the right path, Paula
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:01:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creativity today.. hope your stay on soup is fun..check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morning..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:51:00 AM
Welcome to soup, what a lovely write that spill your heart and soul to the reader perfectly...Michael
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