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Route 666

There are many road that lead to hell, but there is a peculiar one that will surely get you there as well Route 666 It's not on any road map, can't be found by no G.P.S. Could be located anywhere, it's the devil's own private road of death Takes two things to get put on this evil highway: you had to have done something real bad that caused lives to be lost, but you got the blame put on someone else That's requirement number one, your crime being paid by an innocent The other thing is, you had to have stolen a car in order to escape future justice Trying to flee into anonymity But in gaining possession of the vehicle, you take the life of the occupant(s) thereof Thus, the second requirement is met, you just doubled down in dealing out death Route 666 The wheels are now in motion, ladies and gentlemen, please place your bet Will you make it to a safe haven, and get away clean with the dirty deeds Or will you find some gruesome way to die, while evading capture in your stolen motorized steed You don't yet know it, but the race for your soul is on The odds of you making it scot free, well honestly, are impossibly long At the edge of this haunted highway is a lodge called Last Chance Motel Get one last meal and a bad night sleep, then go drive down that soulless stretch like a bat into hell Route 666 The fastest road to hell Many a bad hombre dragged this strip, trying to avoid life sentence in a cell Today is the day the devil's gonna get his kicks Before the night is over, your sins are gonna catch up with you black cat quick Route 666 Highway to hell Has you burning rubber to elude going to jail Your bad luck to steal a car whose steering gets shaky over sixty Flipped you like a burnt burger, another fiery death is what the devil relishes to see Some luckless soul just passed your car, seen it smoldering in a ditch They pressed the pedal to the metal, but outrunning the devil is a ...

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Date: 2/25/2017 8:47:00 AM
Nice one! ;) fabulously implied xomo
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Date: 1/11/2017 10:26:00 PM
Quite a bumpy long drive that was. Outstanding write that reflects your excellence. A 7
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:39:00 AM
..a bitch?.. what inspired you ro write such a piece? It reads like a painting.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/10/2017 5:28:00 AM
Yep. You got it right, Jannie. I guess I was inspired by stuff by Stephen King, and just weaved it w/a biblical context. You are so kind w/your glowing comments. Much love to you.
Date: 1/9/2017 4:14:00 PM
Used to be a real U.S. Route 666, out in the American west - but sadly it was given new numbering designations, mostly the current 491. I miss the old girl - her southern end was Douglas, Arizona, on the Mexican border.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/10/2017 5:26:00 AM
Ty, Doug. You are always a wealth of knowledge, my friend. I did not know that. I always thought of the song by Nat King Cole, "Route 66." Appreciate you stopping by and visiting. Love always to you.
Date: 1/8/2017 2:49:00 AM
Nice craft, Freddie. This is not just a poem but also a biblical message of repentance. Thanks for the evangelism, Freddie. A 7.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/10/2017 5:24:00 AM
Yeah, Adeniji. Tried to put a little pure imagination into a true biblical concept. Our deeds in this life, if evil, will send us to hell. Ty for the support, my beloved friend. Love and joy to you.
Date: 1/8/2017 1:39:00 AM
I'm curious to know where 666 derived from! You are a wonderful story-teller RW.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/8/2017 2:09:00 AM
Ty, White Wolf. That is such a kind thing to say. I am humbled. Love and peace to you, my poetic friend.
Date: 1/7/2017 10:18:00 PM
You are master story teller my talented friend. Bravo on a fine and dark tale! Super 7 on this , was a pleasure to read!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/8/2017 1:57:00 AM
Ty, Robert. As always your support is valued very much. As well as your perceptive comments. Ty my friend. Love always from me to you.
Date: 1/7/2017 6:47:00 PM
mind-blowing as you take me on a journey to a dark alley... i know you seek the high road, freddie... greeat stuff!..huggs
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/8/2017 1:56:00 AM
Ty, Nette. Appreciate the visit and your kind comments. They help boost the morale. Much love to you and your loved ones.

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