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'round the Sun

Another revolution 'round the sun: the plans are laid, the resolutions penned. This is the year at last to be the one: lose weight, exercise more, curtail the spend. Then life, it seems, jumps up, gets in the way: the unexpected call from a dear friend. Your planner list can wait another day, for it was just a minder in the end. The days then turn to weeks before you know, and now you’re so far off the beaten path, the goal you set not very long ago: completely hopeless, when you do the math. It catches you off guard, and you’ve begun another revolution 'round the sun. —————
for the Orphan Sonnet Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet written on 05/01/2022

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Date: 6/2/2022 7:51:00 PM
oh so very very true. you make me love the orphan sonnet more and more. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/31/2022 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/30/2022 2:45:00 PM
Very well written, congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2022 12:32:00 PM
If only it was as easy to carry out a life plan as it is to make one. Congratulations on your winning sonnet, Jeff. Your last couplet also makes fantastic use of your first line!
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Date: 5/30/2022 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Emile’s contest Jeff. I really like Dale’s invented form. Impressive work! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/30/2022 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jeff! Your wonderful poem "'Round the Sun" earned a distinguished place in my “Orphan Sonnet Contest.” Very well done, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/2/2022 6:26:00 AM
I love that...revolution around the sun :)
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Date: 5/1/2022 11:37:00 PM
A real good one Jeff, and I can visualize the scene. "A sudden burst of rain can rapidly alter the terrain"...ab
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Date: 5/1/2022 7:19:00 PM
A really nice one, Jeff. I enjoyed reading it, and I believe Emile will, too. Best wishes for a top spot!
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