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Rotten Grapes

Like the stink of fermented grapes is the deceiver's heart

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/20/2016 5:00:00 PM

Honesty beats deceit anytime, Sara! Yours is a worthy winning entry....congratulations! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 3:06:00 PM

congrats for your win, Sara.

Lu Loo

Date: 7/17/2016 5:49:00 PM

Sara, so true lady...we must try to keep the honest people in our lives at all times. congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 5:01:00 PM

SARA, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/16/2016 7:39:00 PM

Great one liner Sara...smells sweet to me...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2016 1:01:00 PM

Hi Sara, You have penned a wise well written "Monoku". Well done:-) Alexis

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/15/2016 11:50:00 AM

That is a great line!

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/15/2016 9:06:00 AM

Superb oneliner:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2016 8:58:00 AM

Great one liner Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2016 8:49:00 AM

Is this for the one liner contest? It should do great.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2016 8:48:00 AM

I imagine a very sickly sweet smell as well??

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/15/2016 8:55:00 AM

Andrea, Rottening fruit of all kinds has that same spoiled scent so grapes do as well. I used to have to go for training by a place that made peach wine and the scent from that place was horrible..If I get a whiff od wine it has that same sickening scent..Sara